Paradise lost, War befell



It was the time war ended
The eyes of hatred changed to guilt,
Neither this should have occurred
Nor this situation would have been built.

There was a huge windy storm
We wanted it to stop,
But others were interested
And were ready to pop.

There was nothing left
There was destruction everywhere,
Not even a single thing was seen
As peace was never there.

The streets were so lonely
The city was so silent,
People were so quiet
And weren't ready to be violent.

War destroyed everything
Even the beauty of nature,
It has made us suffer a lot
Including the other creatures.

If one fought for their own problems
There would be no wars,
Neither It would  have been such a catastrophe
Nor it would have lost lives of crores.

Everyone is hushed
And want none to decease,
But all of them should understand
That the reason behind war is peace.

 Spread tranquility
In a glance,
It should be positive
Now let's give them a chance.




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