A Sister's Love

Used to fight,
 every night ,
Don't know y but we both look bright.
used to have a good scolding ,
from our mother and father,
Dear elder sister , u r are my care taker .
U help me everyday 
And I ve nothing to say.
U r my first golden Ray of the sun,
My winsome sister we have a lot of fun .
Coz of ur beauty , everyone dies on u ,
If I say the truth , my friends die on u too.
Hey my precious stone , don't ever go away ,
And stay with me everyday .
But regrettably my sista , 
U r going a very good way,
And without u there isn't any good day,
Everyday,
I will pray ,
That u be safe ,
Coz u my sister,
U r conspicuous
And is very beauteous .
U really don't kno my sis
How much I love u . 
Soon I will cum to meet ,
And will surely give u a treat ,
Coz past one year  ,
Oh My dear
We haven't much enjoyed as we did before,
U didn't even found me behind the door ,
So today on ur birthday my darling,
With me please , I wanna see u again giggling and laughing .

 ~PALAK SAHNI

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